Maths and English are More Important than Art and Music

This is a piece of writing that we did in my evening class.

For students to get good jobs in the future, they need to learn many things. They are compulsory subjects in all high schools. We use them in our daily life. Without learning to read and write correctly, people will have many difficulties. Maths and English are more important subjects than any other subjects.


In the first place, people who are good at English have better communication skills than others. Moreover, without maths, you can’t study engineering. In addition to that, maths is the basis to other courses that students can do. Many inventors were good at maths.


Furthermore, studying English and maths can make students smart and have a high IQ. They are important to get good jobs after graduating from university. English and maths are the minimum reqirements to do certain courses.


On the other hand, some people argue that learning music is hard and not everyone can do it. People need to have talent first before learning to play an instrument. Some famous artists and musicians can make a lot of money through their music and art. Music is important because people can feel it around them. It makes you relax and forget about the stresses of life. Music can make people less aggressive.


All things considered, I strongly believe that although music and art are important, learning English and maths is more essential in real life.

Junk Food Ads Should be Banned

Many people watch TV for a very long time including young children. Children always like to watch cartoon programs and they spend a long time glued to their TVs. It is also a good time for junk food companies to advertise their products. After watching these advertisements, children go out and buy these products. Junk food ads should be banned on TV.

How Serious the Problem is Worldwide

According to scientific research, there are 155 million children who are obese around the world/globe. The Age Newspaper says that in Australia, two out of three children are overweight and the third is obese.


The risks of eating junk food

Encouraging young children to eat junk food will have bad consequences in the future. They will suffer from heart disease, diabetes, arthrites and high blood pressure when they grow older.


Advertising companies oppose this and they believe that parents can stop their children from buying junk food. On the other hand, TV channels need to make money to run children’s programs.


I stongly believe that junk food advertisements should be banned during children viewing time because they need to be active and take part in sports activities to become healthy.


In conclusion, To sum up, the Australian TV is full of junk food advertisements that try to attract young children to buy their products but this has to stop. (calling for action)

Ban Junk Food Ads

This post is for my students in Certificate III at AMES. You can read this article online to learn about the topic. This will help you in your writing.

http://www.abc.net.au/health/thepulse/stories/2004/11/25/1251181.htm

This one is from the BBC web site

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/health/3586585.stm

And this one too

http://www.news.com.au/parents-want-junk-food-ads-banned/story-e6frfkp9-1111113546659

And this is a debate

http://debatepedia.idebate.org/en/index.php/Debate:_Junk_food_advertising_ban

Where is Gamal Mubarak?

From Aljazeera Web Site

Protest and Die in Egypt

This is from the BBC web site.

  http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-africa-12283849

Ending a Demonstration by Force in Cairo