Wednesday 9 December 2009

Cover Letter

This is just a sample cover letter. This is not my address or telephone number. You can copy parts of the letter and make your own.


Ibrahim Mohamed
3/22 Howard Street,
Box Hill, 3128
Tel: 9876 5432
Mob: 04123 567 890

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regards to your advertisment for a kitchen hand on the Age newspaper on Saturday 12th May, 2009. I believe my experience and work ethics make me suitable for this job.

I am interested in working in the health and aged care industry. I have recently completed Certificate I in Hospitality at AMES in Box Hill. The course included two weeks of work placement at ....................

I wish to apply for any full-time, part-time or casual position in the food preparation and delivery area.

My skills and experience relevant to this position are as follows:
  • Three years experience working at Stars Hotel in Hong Kong.
  • Dealing effectively, pleasantly and professionally with customers.
  • Excellent time management skills.
  • Good leadership skills.
I have indcluded my resume for your consideration.

I would welcome the opportunity to further dicuss my experience and resume details at any time you see suitable.

Looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience.

Yours sincerely,




Ibrahim Mohamed

Wednesday 2 December 2009

Employment Vocabulary

work / job / career / profession
They all mean the same. I need to find work = I need to find a job = I need to find a career = I need to find a profession.
We don't say "I need to find a work." We say "I need to find work."
What do you do? = What is your job?
what do you do for a living? What is your profession?
Job ad = job advertisment
In Australia most job ads are found online. There is a big number of job ads in newspapers too like The Age on Saturday.
Employment web sites
There are many employment web sites in Australia including My Career, Career One, Job Search, Seek and many more. You have to use a computer connected to the internet to see the information provided on these sites.
Apply for work
After finishing my course I intend to apply for work at the kitchen at Box Hill hospital.
When I came to Australia years ago it was very hard to apply for work because I didn't have any Australian qualification.
Apply for a job
My sister wants to apply for a job at Telstra.
The job market
The job market in Australia keeps changing. There is somtimes a high demand for hairdressers and after a few months they need to employ a big number of nurses and not hairdressers. The job market in Australia keeps changing.
Submit a job application
I read a job ad in the newspaper, typed a resume and then submitted my job application to the manager of the company. He will have a look at my application and get back to me next week if I am lucky.
Process a job application
The manager will have a look at my resume and cover letter. He will process my job application and get back to me soon.
Reject a job offer
The company wanted to give me a job but I decided to reject their job offer. They wanted to pay me little money. I would be crazy if I accepted their job offer. I can work anywhere I like. If they want to hire me, they must pay me a fair salary.
Turn down a job offer
The company wanted me to work for them but I decided to turn their job offer down. I don't want to work for them. I live far away and I don't want to travel a lot.
Job description
A detailed document of what you have to do at your work.
Update your resume
Before you send a resume that you typed a few months ago, have a look at it and see if you need to add any new information. This is how you update your resume.
Bad resume = Bad CV
A bad resume is one that is full of grammar and spelling mistakes. It can also be a very short one and does not have enough information about your work.
Impressive resume
An impressive resume is a very good one that you spend a lot of time preparing it.
Educational background
Information that you provide in your resume about the education you had in your country and in Australia. The first item you provide is always the most recent one.
Rework your resume
When you have a look at your resume and you are not %100 happy, you decide to change certain things on it. This is how you rework your resume to make it look better.
Give details about your work experience
In your resume you give details about your previous work in your country and in Australia. You also give the names of the companies you worked at.
Work experience
You mention where and how long you worked for. Mention any work you did that is related to the job you are applying for.
Body language
The way you use your hands and body to give a meaning when you talk.
Job interview
A meeting you have with a manager or a business owner before you get a job. This person wants to know if you are the best one for the job. Your aim is to answer the questions the person asks correctly and prove that you will work hard for them if they give you the job. There are many job interview sample questions on the internet.
References / Referees
Those are the people who know you and know about your work. You put their names and phone numbers on your resume but you have to ask them first before you do that.
get fired from a job = get sacked = get tha sack
If a person gets fired from his/her job, he or she must have made a big mistake or are very lazy and are no good for the company. They are sometimes trouble makers or cause problems at work.
hire someone
When a manager decides to hire someone, he or she decides to give this person a job. If he or she sees that person no good for the company, the manager does not offer a job to that person. they decide not to hire the person.
job candidate / job applicant
Any person applying for a job is called a job candidate. If you apply for a job, you have to know that you are not the only one who wants to get it. There are other candidates who want to get it too.
Polish your shoes
Before you go to have a job interview or before you go and ask a girl to marry you, remember to polish your shoes well.
Check references
After you submit your job application, the manager at the company will have to contact your references to ask them about you and your work. This is how managers check references in Australia. Make sure you choose people who will speak well about you and your work. They can't be your husband/wife or family members. They have to be in Australia and know that someone will be calling them to ask about your work.
To be shortlisted
If there is a big number of people trying to apply for one job, the manager always chooses a small number of the candidates. The small group is called a shor list. If you get shortlisted, this means that your name is on the new list. After studying their resumes again, the manager decides to give the job to one of them.
Keep things on record
When a company says they will keep your details on record this means that they will keep your job application and your details in case they need to employ someone in the future. They can keep your records for one year. Any thing can happen in this year and they can call and ask you to start in a week's time. This can make you very close to getting a job.
Cover letter
Another document that you provide in additon to your resume. This is prepared in a special way. It is not required if you want to work in a factory or a kitchen. It is normally required when you apply for a highly-paid position.

Employment Vocabulary

Here is a good web site to teach you about vocabulary that you can use in your job hunting. Click here to go to the web site. If you come from Thailand, it will be easy for you to know the meaning of the words.

Friday 27 November 2009

Presentation on Smoking

Good morning ladies and gentlemen. My name is Ibrahim Mohamed and today I’d like to talk about why cigarette advertising should be totally banned in Australia.

My presentation is divided into three parts. Firstly, I will be talking about the effects of smoking on our health. Secondly, I will be talking about passive smoking and how it affects health. Thirdly, I will be talking about how the government is giving a blind eye to what cigarette companies are doing.

Please feel free to ask any questions you may have at the end of my presentation. Now let’s start.

The first part of this presentation is about the effects of smoking on our health. As you know, new research tells us every day that smoking is harmful to health and yet many more people start to smoke. It has been proven without any doubt that smoking cigarettes causes many diseases such as mouth and lung cancer, heart disease, lung disease and many more. In addition to that, it destroys blood vessels.

The second part of my presentation is about passive smoking. This happens when you don’t smoke but share the same room with someone who does. Your health can also be badly affected by the smoke. Sometimes we refer to passive smoking when we say second-hand smoking. They mean the same. Passive smoking is a health hazard. Exposure to passive smoking is a serious health hazard for smokers and non-smokers. People who inhale smoke from others are at increased risk of disease. A recent study By Mayo Clinic in America indicates that

• Non-smokers living with smokers have about a 25 to 30 per cent increase in risk of heart disease and are also more likely to suffer a stroke.

• Exposure to second-hand smoke is especially risky for children and babies and may cause low birth weight, sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), bronchitis, pneumonia, asthma and middle ear infections.

The third part of my presentation is about the role of the Australian Government and how it encourages tobacco companies to destroy the health of millions of Australians. In Australia, 15,000 to 19,000 Australians deaths each year are caused by smoking. Roughly 20% of the Australian population smokes. Aboriginal life expectancy is 17 years less than non-indigenous Australians. Their high smoking rate gets part of the blame. Government officials say they are trying to address the issue.

 Because tobacco companies pay billions of dollars every year to the government in taxes, it allows them to target young non-smokers through advertising and promotions. For example, they pay top dollars to famous film stars to smoke in films. The government says it is investing 10.5 million dollars this year to reduce smoking indigenous rate. On the other hand it is not doing enough to protect millions of young Australians who are the target of tobacco companies’ advertisement campaigns. A recent study conducted in Australia shows that exposure to tobacco advertising and promotion is associated with the likelihood that adolescents will start to smoke.

In short, I would like to assert that cigarette advertismnets should be banned in Australia. Tobacco advertisements are a silent killer to everyone and the government is not doing enough. Thousands of non-smokers start to smoke every day because of cigarette advertismnets. This brings me to the end of this presentation today. Thanks very much for your attention. Now if you have any questions, I will be more than happy to answer them.

Wednesday 25 November 2009

How Students Get Jobs

I came across this web page from the BBC and found it useful to use. Read what people from different countries think is the best way to get a job. Please click here to go to the page.

Wednesday 11 November 2009

Murder in Court

An Egyptian pharmacist went to live in Germany with her husband who was doing a PhD in science a few years ago. One day she took her three-year-old son to a nearby park for an outing in the city of Dresden. A man who happened to be her neighbour wouldn’t allow the boy to use a swing and started an argument with her. He verbally abused her, insulted her religion and called her a terrorist because she was wearing a headscarf.

The thirty-three-year-old woman took him to court and a judge ordered him to pay 750 Euros compensation to the victim. The man was outraged and appealed the ruling. He went to court for the second time. In court the man produced a knife and stabbed her 18 times in front of her husband and three-year-old son. The husband tried to defend her but he got stabbed by the attacker. He was also shot three times by a policeman who thought the husband was the attacker.

The criminal case shocked everyone in the Middle East and attracted much attention. People in the victim’s hometown of Alexandria were angry because the case had very little media coverage in Germany and was never mentioned on TV. They argued that if the attacker had been Muslim, the case would have made headlines around the globe. Senior Egyptian and German officials attended the funeral in Alexandria with thousands of mourners. Police in Germany didn't release the identity of the attacker and only said that he was a Russian immigrant.

The husband was unable to attend the funeral as he was still receiving medical treatment for his wounds in hospital in Germany. He told an Egyptian newspaper that they were due back in Egypt three days after the murder as he had already submitted his PhD thesis and finished his scholarship in Germany.
Fill in the gaps:
ordered - case - for - knife - headlines - called - still
An Egyptian pharmacist went to live in Germany with her husband who was doing a PhD in science a few years ago. One day she took her three-year-old son to a nearby park ............. an outing in the city of Dresden. A man who happened to be her neighbour wouldn’t allow the boy to use a swing and started an argument with her. He verbally abused her, insulted her religion and ............. her a terrorist because she was wearing a headscarf. The thirty-three-year-old woman took him to court and a judge ................ him to pay 750 Euros compensation to the victim. The man was outraged and appealed the ruling. He went to court for the second time. In court the man produced a ............... and stabbed her 18 times in front of her husband and three-year-old son. The husband tried to defend her but he got stabbed by the attacker. He was also shot three times by a policeman who thought the husband was the attacker. The criminal ................ shocked everyone in the Middle East and attracted much attention. People in the victim’s hometown of Alexandria were angry because the case had very little media coverage in Germany and was never mentioned on TV. They argued that if the attacker had been Muslim, the case would have made ................ around the globe. Senior Egyptian and German officials attended the funeral in Alexandria with thousands of mourners. Police in Germany didn't release the identity of the attacker and only said that he was a Russian immigrant. The husband was unable to attend the funeral as he was ............... receiving medical treatment for his wounds in hospital in Germany. He told an Egyptian newspaper that they were due back in Egypt three days after the murder as he had already submitted his PhD thesis and finished his scholarship in Germany.
Answer These Questions:
Why did the Egyptian pharmacist go to Germany?
What happened when she took her son to a nearby park?
What city in Germany did the pair live in?
What did the attacker do to the husband?
What happened when the first judge ordered the man to pay compensation to the woman?
Why did the man go to court for the second time?
What happened during the hearing in court?
Why were people angry in the Middle East?
When were the husband and wife due back in their country?
What happened when the German policeman entered the court room?
Why didn't the husband attend the funeral of his wife and his unborn baby?

Heart Attacks

Nowadays in Australia there is a media campaign to let people know about heart attacks. People need to be educated on what to do if someone suffers from a heart attack at home or anywhere else. Providing quick first aide to a patient is very important while paramedics are on their way to give medical assistance.
People who suffer a heart attack normally feel pain in the centre of the chest or behind the breastbone. This can last for a few minutes before the heart attack. They may feel pain spreading to the shoulders, neck, jaw or arms. Those people can start to sweat and feel short of breath. A person can feel rapid or irregular heartbeats. He or she may also feel dizzy or sick in the stomach.
A person can also suffer from a silent heart attack. In a silent heart attack a person does not feel that there is something wrong. This is common among people who suffer from diabetes.
Heart attacks are common in Australia among people who are overweight or smoke a lot. Those people normally don't lead an active lifestyle. They drink much and have high cholestrerol levels. Living under a lot of stress can increase someone's chances of having a heart attack.
Heart attacks are a big problem in America. There are nearly one million Americans who suffer heart attacks every year. In a heart attack the heart gets blocked suddenly.
When a person suffers a heart attack, he or she must be rushed to hospital straight away. This is normally done by dialling 000 and asking for the ambulance service. When the patient is in hospital doctors do many quick tests to see how much damage was done to the heart. This is called an ECG scan. Doctos also take the patient's blood preasure and perform surgical operations if needed to safe the person's life.
To avoid having a heart attack you should:
- stop smoking

- see your doctor for regular check ups of your blood pressure and blood cholesterol levels

- eat a low fat diet, especially animal fat

- keep to a healthy weight

- take regular moderate exercise, such as walking
Fill in the gaps:
common - chest  - exercise - from - feel - high - attack - can
Nowadays in Australia there is a media campaign to let people know about heart attacks. People need to be educated on what to do if someone suffers ............ a heart attack at home or anywhere else. Providing quick first aide to a patient is very important while paramedics are on their way to give medical assistance. People who suffer a heart attack normally feel pain in the centre of the ............... or behind the breastbone. This can last for a few minutes before the heart attack. They may feel pain spreading to the shoulders, neck, jaw or arms. Those people ............ start to sweat and feel short of breath. A person can feel rapid or irregular heartbeats. He or she may also ............ dizzy or sick in the stomach. A person can also suffer from a silent heart attack. In a silent heart attack a person does not feel that there is something wrong. This is common among people who suffer from diabetes. Heart attacks are .................. in Australia among people who are overweight or smoke a lot. Those people normally don't lead an active lifestyle. They drink much and have ............... cholestrerol levels. Living under a lot of stress can increase someone's chances of having a heart attack. Heart attacks are a big problem in America. There are nearly one million Americans who suffer heart attacks every year. In a heart attack the heart gets blocked suddenly. When a person suffers a heart attack, he or she must be rushed to hospital straight away. This is normally done by dialling 000 and asking for the ambulance service. When the patient is in hospital doctors do many quick tests to see how much damage was done to the heart. This is called an ECG scan. Doctos also take the patient's blood preasure and perform surgical operations if needed to safe the person's life. To avoid having a heart .............. you should: - stop smoking - see your doctor for regular check ups of your blood pressure and blood cholesterol levels - eat a low fat diet, especially animal fat - keep to a healthy weight - take regular moderate .................. , such as walking.

Interview Questions

Why should we hire you?
Because I am a hard-working person. I am a quick learner. I can think on my feet. I can work independantly and under pressure. I also have the qualifications that you ask for. I am totally reliable and I have done the training required for the job. I am also passionate about this job.

What do you know about our company?
It is a rapidly growing company. You have branches overseas in China and Vietnam too. You treat your employees very well and you give them a chance to take initiatives. I am also aware of the range of products that you manufacture.

Why have you applied for this job?
I have got the training to do this job and this is something that I really want to do. I also have to earn a living in Australia.

Do you know anyone who works at our company?
No, unfortunately I don't know anyone here but I would like to make as many friends as I can in the future if I get the job.

What kind of people do you normally like to work with?
I like working with people who are friendly and are willing to share their experiences.

What kind of people do you find it most difficult to work with?
I do't like working with people who are arrogant or those who think that they know everything and others know nothing.

What are some things you'd like to avoid in a job?
I would avoid discussing politics and religion at work.

In your previous job, what kind of pressures did you have?
Meeting deadlines and having to do too much work in a short time. Sometimes it was not humanly possible to do what the boss wanted but we could not argue with him. He was the business owner.

What are some of the things about which you and your supervisor might disagree on?
My boss sometimes asked me to do work that was supposed to be done by another qualified person and refused to pay me for the service. He said I had the training but it was not accredited in Australia and that is why he wouldn't pay me for the work I did. He was using me.

What do you think of your previous supervisor?
He was a good person. He was always sharing his knowledge and showing me things. He was friendly but very strict.

How do you feel your boss rated your work performance?
I think he liked my work very much. I always came to work on time and was punctual. I worked hard and I did all I could to finish all the tasks given to me. I always came up with new ideas and he liked that very much. He knew that I could work independently and in a group and I was alwyas reliable. I think he can tell you more about my work if you ring him.

What were some of the things he indicated you could improve on?
He said that I should work on improving my English and learn more computer skills. He recommened that I go to TAFE and do a course there but I found it difficult because I didn't have a car and I had a family to look after.

What is the most difficult part of your previous job?
Working with people who thought that because I came from another country I was not as smart as they were. They also thought that the education that I had overseas was not good enough. They started to change their minds when they saw me working and coming up with all these new ideas. They were amazed.

How do you handle conflict with co-workers?
By negotiations. The only way to resolve a conflict is to talk to people and try to make them understand what you want to say.

In what area do you think you need to develop yourself to be ready for this position?
I need to learn more about using technology and the internet. This will help me in my work.

What are your salary expectations?
I want to have a fair salary. I don't ask for a big salary. I just want a fair one.

Of all the positions you have held, which did you like the least? Why?
I had three jobs in China when I was living there but I liked my last job most. I had a chance to use my skills and share ideas with other people and we worked like a family. It was good social life too.

Of all the positions you have held, which did you like the most? Why?
My first job was the worst. The people I worked with were unfriendly. They never cared about teaching me anything and all the things I learned on the job I had to learn by myself.

Are you flexible?
Yes, I am totally flexible. I can work overtime if you want me to. I can also work on the weekend any time.

Where do you see yourself in five years’ time from now?
I will be working in your company if I get the job. Maybe in a higher position I hope.

Have you ever been fired or asked to leave your work?
I have never been sacked before. In fact when I left my last job before I came to Australia everyone was sad. We worked in a big team and we were like a family. My boss was very satisfied with my performance at work and he even offered me more money to stay but I decided to immigrate to Australia.

Tell me about the time you had a conflict with your boss. How did you handle it?
I told my boss one day that he shouldn't have given a task to someone to do because that person was not qualified to do it. The boss thought he could save a lot of money by getting someone from the factory to do some electrical wiring and not hire a qualified electrician. The boss was wrong. He put the life of the worker in danger. The boss thought the worker could do the job and he could save the money. I talked to the boss and he finally agreed to hire an electrician after I told him the unqualified worker can damage the expensive machine he was working on.

Will you be able to provide me the names of your supervisors for each of the positions listed on your resume, and will I have your permission to call them?
Yes, of course. The names are provided on my CV and you can call those people any time.

What do you think your friends will tell me about you?
I think they will say that I am honest. I like helping people. I am also a good friend and a nice person.

What else would you like to tell me about yourself that you haven't had a chance to tell me?
I really look forward to working at your company. I can be an assit for your company. I need to get a job to support my family here and share the experience I have with everybody else.

Are you considering going back to study in the near future?
I want to do a TAFE course but I will be studying part-time in the evening. I want to update my computer and work skills.

Sunday 1 November 2009

Shame - 6

Chapter 6 
Three weeks later, there was a small meeting in the evening at the family home. The mother was sitting down with Kamal, Nader and Salwa. Only one person was not there – Moustafa. As usual, he was at the store in the city centre, which was a fair distance from home. Everyone was waiting for him to come for dinner. Kamal was waiting to see his brother more than anyone else. Kamal had some questions for Moustafa to answer and these questions were serious. Kamal kept looking at his watch and checking the time. He looked nervous too but no one could tell why.

A few minutes later, Kamal arrived. He kissed the hand of his mother as a sign of respect, huged his two brothers and joked with his little sister. Now everyone was ready for dinner to be served. Nader took a seat next to his mother. Now Kamal sits in the same chair where the late Haj used to sit. After all, Kamal is the head of the family even though he was not that old. He was only 40 years old. This was also a chance for the family to get on with life.

Nader started talking about his workday. All the family starts a normal conversation the same way they used to while having dinner. Kamal started talking to his brother asking him about the documents that still needed to be signed for the inheritance. Moustafa said every thing was OK and it was a matter of days when the accountant got every thing ready. He asked his brother not to worry much. After all, government documents sometimes took a very long time to be done.

Kamal asked Moustafa if there were any problems with the business finances. Kamal assured him that the money in the bank was increasing day after day thanks to the good planning of the late Haj used. At that moment Kamal seemed to lose his temper a bit. He asked his brother why 5 million dollars were withdrawn from the Haj’s account on the day he died. Now there was sudden silence in the room and everyone’s’ eyes turned toward Kamal who didn’t expect to be asked in such a manner. He looked hesitant and reached out for a glass of water in front of him. Kamal said that only Moustafa could withdraw money from the account because the Haj gave him authority in the bank to do so.

Kamal said that the money was a payment for a big shipment of spices that was on the way from India. It was a matter of days when the shipment arrived and the business made a good profit. Moustafa expressed his discontent at the way Kamal asked the question.

Moustafa started to raise his voice and asked Kamal to come up with the documents about the imported spices. He declared to everyone that something fishy was going on but he didn’t know what it was. Tempers in the dining room were very high at that point. Nader tried to calm everyone down. He asked why Kamal would lie about money. After all they were a very close family and everyone knew exactly how much they were getting.

Mother looked at her children sadly but didn’t understand why things were not clear. Still Kamal wanted clear answers to be given. Moustafa tried to dodge direct questions and reminded everyone he worked hard building the family’s business with the late Haj. Kamal still pressed on with demands that documents be produced to support Moustafa’s statement about the bank account. Everyone could see that Moustafa’s blood was boiling at that stage. Kamal asserted that if Moustafa couldn’t produce such documents, that would prove that he took money from the family’s bank account without any right.

Discussion reached a boiling point and tension in the room was very high. Mother was on the verge of collapsing seeing her children having such a heated discussion. Tension in the room got higher and higher. Kamal and Moustafa kept shouting at each other. Then Moustafa asked Kamal and Nader to come out for some real talk outside the home where he would give them serious answers to the questions going on in their minds. The three brothers left the room ignoring their mother and sister who begged them to stay inside the house and calm down. Moustafa lighted a cigarette and left the room with Kamal and Nader.

Shame - 5

Chapter 5 
A few days after the burial, the family gathered in the dining room to have dinner together. Dinner was the only time when everyone was there. The short leave that everyone got from work ended and they had to go back to work. The family’s shop had to be reopened for business as usual. Moustafa started paying his brothers and sister’s allowances as usual and on time the same way the late Haj used to do. Now he had the big task of filling in the late Haj’s shoes. 

Kamal had to wait for some time before things settled down. He still wanted to buy that apartment. Kamal decided that when he got his rightful inheritance, it would be easy for him to get the apartment. The only problem was that his eldest brother, Moustafa, was always not there to talk to and was drowning to his ears at work. The Haj used to run the business from his office at the big wholesale store normally by phone. He put a lot of trust on Moustafa to run the business with him. Now Moustafa has to make all the decisions and watch the workers carry them out.


Kamal felt sorry for his brother and offered to take a leave from his work for a few weeks to help Moustafa run the business but Moustafa refused. Moustafa said that a government job was totally different from running a business. To run a business, you had to be very careful and very tough sometimes. As for the business accounts, the family’s accountant was doing a good job and keeping records of every cent.

Kamal was a little surprised by his brother’s reaction. He could see that his brother really needed help to run the business. May be he didn’t realize how big the task was or that he wanted to prove to the family that he could run the business the same way it used to be when the Haj was alive. Kamal brushed off any bad thoughts. After all, Moustafa was the late Haj’s most trusted person in running the business. 

Moustafa had always been stubborn and always did what he wanted to do. There was no need to rush him at that critical moment. Close family members never had to put each other under pressure.

Shame - 4

Chapter 4 
At Haj Ali’s home there was a big crowd of people who came to pay respect to the Haj. The three sons received visitors and everyone sat to listen to verses from the Qur’an in complete silence. Women sat separately in different rooms inside the big house and most of them were crying. Haj Ali’s house was on the outskirts of Cairo far away from the noise of the city.

Late at night every thing seemed quieter and many people started to leave. Some of those people came from as far away as 300 kilometers to pay their respect to the dead man. Others who lived overseas rang the family to express their shock at the sudden death of the Haj.

They were all full of praise for his good deeds and charitable work all his life. Not long after that, the door shut quietly behind the last person. The Haj’s wife looked shattered and her four children were next to her. The Haj’s death was especially hard for the daughter who was having her final exams in two weeks’ time in the final year of her university study. She got a lot of emotional support from her fiancé who had to take some days off to be next to her.

It was a hard time for the family especially for Haj Ali’s wife of 45 years. It was equally hard for Kamal’s wife who was expecting to have her baby in a few weeks’ time. She often regarded the late Haj as a kind-hearted father. Every one in the family was shattered by the news of the Haj’s death but they were all determined to try to get over their tragedy. It seemed that only time would heal their wounds.

Kamal decided to leave his small apartment for some time and stay at the big family’s home to be close to his mother to make it easy for her and show family support. The next few days would be very busy for everyone. They would be dealing with lawyers, accountants and other government officials to sort out the inheritance.

It was known exactly how much everyone was getting according to Islamic law. They didn’t have to worry a lot about money issues. They trusted that their eldest brother, Moustafa, would work things out. After all, he was the one who knew where all the money was. It was only a matter of time.

Now that the Haj had been buried, every thing seemed different from what it was like one day earlier. Life suddenly turned miserable and their mother looked many years older in a short time. It was a personal tragedy for everyone.


Shame - 3

Chapter 3
Many cars stopped in the middle of the Desert Road that linked Cairo and Alexandria in Egypt because of a big accident. There were some policemen at the scene and paramedics were racing time trying to save the lives of some people involved in a big car crash. The number of cars that had to stop was increasing by the minute in both directions and the road came to a stand still.

Two cars at the centre of the accident were totally smashed. The two cars involved were a taxi that had four people inside and the other was the late model car that Haj Ali drove. More people gathered and some of them were trying to get the injured out of the cars and help paramedics and police. The accident was horrific and it did not take long for the paramedics to pronounce Haj Ali and the four other people in a car from the opposite direction dead.

The police got some ID cards from the people involved in the accident. They also got the registration numbers of the two cars to start contacting their families. The bodies of the casualties were carried away from the middle of the road. The police wanted to reopen it for traffic as soon as they could. People who saw the accident said that the old man must have slept while driving before his car went to the wrong side of the road hitting the taxi head on.

Haj Ali could not keep his word this time when he said he was coming for dinner with all his children at the family home.

Shame - 2

Chapter 2 
At a big hospital in the heart of Cairo Dr Nader was rushing through the emergency department. He was told that a patient’s life was in danger due to a drug overdose. Doctor Nader was racing time to save the life of the patient who was screaming and refusing to have alife-saving medical treatment. Some male nurses were helping in controlling the drug addict but he was still very violent.

The addict kept kicking and screaming not knowing that his life was in danger. Dr Nader was one of Haj Ali’s sons. Today’s patient is one of the regular ones they saw every now and then at the emergency department. Dr Nader managed to control the drug addict and went out of the ward heading to his office to do some paperwork. He talked to a police officer and started filling in an incident report about the aggressive patient.


Dr. Nader felt sorry for all those foolish young people who used illicit drugs and put their lives in danger. Dr. Nader felt that all drug dealers should be hanged in a public square to pay the price for all the lives lost every day from drug overdoses. He always read stories in the newspapers about families shattered by drug problems and children who ended up in the streets instead of going to schools and having good education. He knew exactly how big the problem really was.


Dr Nader felt angry and frustrated at how easy young people could buy drugs even in poor areas in Egypt. After finishing the paperwork, Dr Nader gave his mother a call telling her he would be on time for dinner. Dr Nader was not married and still lived in the family home with his parents and his little sister. His sister was about to graduate and get married to a policeman whose name was Ahmed. It was clear to everyone how madly in love they were. It was a matter of weeks until she finished her study and then they would have a big wedding. She was planning for the big day for quite some time.


Some members in Ahmed’s family were policemen too. Ahmed’s parents didn’t seem to have much money to cover the costs of the wedding and that was why he accepted more dangerous tasks at work to get more money. Ahmed was very professional and did not discuss his work with his fiancé. He wouldn’t tell her that the sort of work he did. This only meant that his life was in danger in every minute.


Today all the family were having dinner late because Haj Ali was travelling on business driving his own late model car. He even refused to let his own driver drive the car for him saying that the driver was a family man who didn’t spend enough time with his kids and gave him a day off. Moustafa did not travel with Haj Ali who asked him to stay at the shop and take care of the business.

Shame - 1

Chapter One
Kamal was a 40-year-old hard working lawyer. He stopped his car in the city centre in Cairo and headed slowly to one of the biggest shops in the area and walked in. The workers greeted him with big smiles and warm handshakes. He got extra attention from everyone there because it was his father’s shop. The shop always had a good reputation over the years for selling spices at reasonable prices.

The family had been in this business for many years and the shop was handed down from one generation to the next. Today he came for a quick visit to see his father and eldest brother, Moustafa, who helped in running the business Kamal hadn’t seen them for a over 2 weeks. Kamal was always busy and running out of time at work. He found it hard to have a busy professional life and a personal one. His work seemed to take up all his time.

Kamal was greeted by his elder brother Moustafa who was moving from one section in the shop to another giving orders to the workers. To a stranger, it was hard to tell that they were brothers. Moustafa didn’t have much education but was good at running the business and making money from importing and selling spices. Moustafa left school as soon as he finished year 9 because he never liked it and never did well there.

It was surprising that he was the only one in Haj Ali’s four children who didn’t do well at school. There was a younger brother who worked as a doctor. His name was Nader and he treated drug addicts in a public hospital. There was also a young sister who was still studying at university to become an accountant. Kamal went directly to his father’s office at the end of the big shop with his elder brother Moustafa. He had to wait for some time, as his father was not available. He was at the local mosque for the noon prayer.

After a few minutes the father came to the shop and Kamal shook hands with him and kissed his hand. Kissing a parent’s hand is a sign of respect in the Middle East. It was a warm meeting, as Kamal hadn’t seen his father because work was never ending.

Haj Ali was loved by everyone who got to know him. He was known for spending a lot of money on charity and helping the poor. People who were close to him, especially in the same business, knew that he was a God-fearing man who always kept his word. He was a man of his word all the time especially when he did business with other traders. Haj Ali allocated monthly allowances to poor families. He kept this a secret but everyone knew about it because the poor people who got the money told everyone about his generousity.

Although Kamal had a good position, he was not getting much money working in a government position. The only thing that made him feel good about his job was the satisfaction he got every time he managed to convict a criminal and put him in prison. Haj Ali always gave Kamal a monthly allowance of 1000 Egyptian pounds to help with life expenses. After all, his son had a government job that did not pay much. Haj Ali could have given his son more and more money but he chose not to. He wanted his son to learn how to earn a living and not depend on his father's money.  Haj Ali gave monthly allowances to his other two sons and daughter. Haj Ali did so every month but it was not clear how much he used to give Moustafa who was by his father’s side all the time. Haj Ali and Moustafa were always talking about business.

This time Kamal came to ask for a bigger amount of money to buy a bigger apartment. His wife was pregnant and he was hoping to buy the apartment before the baby was born. The amount Kamal was asking for was a big one this time. Haj Ali asked him to wait for some time as the market was down a bit and a lot of money was invested in importing a big shipment of spices from India that was on its way. Kamal was not satisfied with his father’s response but he had no other option but to wait.

It was a short visit and Kamal realized that he had to go to attend an important meeting at work. He said goodbye to his father and brother and headed back to his office. Kamal liked his job because he thought that putting criminals behind bars was the only way to protect society from their evil. He also felt frustrated every time a drug dealer avoided going to jail with the help of corrupt lawyers who let them avoid justice. Kamal’s job was to make sure their evil deeds would never go unpunished.

Saturday 31 October 2009

Wednesday 28 October 2009

Armed Robbery

It is normally safe to work at most workplaces in Australia. People are friendly and help one another. Sometimes there are some problems at the workplace like an armed robbery.
In an armed robbery a person enters a workplace with a weapon (a gun, a knife or even a syringe) and demands money. This person wants to steal as much money as he can and leave the place as soon as possible. The armed person normally covres his face and tries to avoid security cameras. This happens every day in Melbourne at different small shops, 7/11s and others businesses.These businesses already have their own problems with shop lifters but an armed robbery is the last thing any business owner wants to have.
In an armed robbery, remember to remain calm. Don't panic (although that is natural when you see a gun pointed at you). Don't try to argue with the person holding the gun. Follow orders and don't try to attach the person holding the weapon. You can get yourself killed. Don't say any rude words to the robber. Don't try to make him angry. The armed robbery normally takes less than a minute and the person runs away out of the shop where there is a get away car waiting for him.Even if you have a lot of cash in the drawer, let the person take all he wants. Don't try to stop that person at all. Your life is much more important than the money. Try to talk to the person nicely. These are some of the sentences you can use:
- Why are you doing this to me?
- I don't have a lot of money in the drower. It is not worth doing what you are doing.
- You seem like a nice man. I don't think you are a criminal.
- I will give you all the money that I have in the drower but is it really worth it?
- I work hard for this money and now you are taking it. (This can start a conversation)
- I haven't done any harm to you before, have I?
After the robbery
After the person leaves the place, don't try to run after him. Dial 000 and ask to talk to the police. Don't touch any thing that the robber touched. The police will come in a very short notice and do their work. They will search the nearby streets and try to find the robber. They will try to get finger prints of the robber. If you have security cameras this will help them too. Remember how tall the person was. Tell the police if the person was fat or slim. The police will get foot prints too so don't walk in the same spot that the robber stood in. Close the door and don't allow any customers inside the business.
Ask people who were in the shop to stay inside and be witnesses. Those people can give more information to the police. If they have to leave, ask them for their addresses and phone numbers. The police can talk to them later. Call anyone from your family and tell them that you are safe.
Most people who rob businesses are drug addicts and they can be very dangerous and people who get robbed are always traumatised by the experience.
What is wrong with these sentences:
In an armed robbery you don't have to obey the robber.
An armed robber normally stays inside a shop for a long time when he robs it.
Robbers are not normally violent.
The police normally take a long time before they come to investigate an armed robbery.
The people in the shop where the armed robbery took place normally refuse to be witnesses.
It is good to argue with the robber when he is aiming a gun at you.
Getting some information on what to do during an armed robbery can't save your life.
People who rob businesses are normally drug effects.
You can give the police some information about the robber such as how tall or rich the robber is.
After the robbery ends, you must chase the robber outside the business.
Fill in the gaps:
give - out - problems - how - demands - criminal - gun
It is normally safe to work at most workplaces in Australia. People are friendly and help one another. Sometimes there are some problems at the workplace like an armed robbery. In an armed robbery a person enters a workplace with a weapon (a gun, a knife or even a syringe) and ........... money. This person wants to steal as much money as he can and leave the place as soon as possible. The armed person normally covres his face and tries to avoid security cameras. This happens every day in Melbourne at different small shops, 7/11s and others businesses.These businesses already have their own ............ with shop lifters but an armed robbery is the last thing any business owner wants to have. In an armed robbery, remember to remain calm. Don't panic (although that is natural when you see a ............ pointed at you). Don't try to argue with the person holding the gun. Follow orders and don't try to attach the person holding the weapon. You can get yourself killed. Don't say any rude words to the robber. Don't try to make him angry. The armed robbery normally takes less than a minute and the person runs away ........... of the shop where there is a get away car waiting for him.Even if you have a lot of cash in the drawer, let the person take all he wants. Don't try to stop that person at all. Your life is much more important than the money. Try to talk to the person nicely. These are some of the sentences you can use:
- Why are you doing this to me? - I don't have a lot of money in the drower. It is not worth doing what you are doing. - You seem like a nice man. I don't think you are a ............. . - I will give you all the money that I have in the drower but is it really worth it? - I work hard for this money and now you are taking it. (This can start a conversation) - I haven't done any harm to you before, have I?
After the person leaves the place, don't try to run after him. Dial 000 and ask to talk to the police. Don't touch any thing that the robber touched. The police will come in a very short notice and do their work. They will search the nearby streets and try to find the robber. They will try to get finger prints of the robber. If you have security cameras this will help them too. Remember ............ tall the person was. Tell the police if the person was fat or slim. The police will get foot prints too so don't walk in the same spot that the robber stood in. Close the door and don't allow any customers inside the business. Ask people who were in the shop to stay inside and be witnesses. Those people can ............ more information to the police. If they have to leave, ask them for their addresses and phone numbers. The police can talk to them later. Call anyone from your family and tell them that you are safe. Most people who rob businesses are drug addicts and they can be very dangerous and people who get robbed are always traumatised by the experience.
Can you find some mistakes?
It is normally safe to work at most workplaces in Australia. People are friendly and ignore one another. Sometimes there are some problems at the workplace like an armed robbery. In an armed robbery a person enters a workplace with a weapon (a gun, a knife or even a syringe) and demands money. This person wants to steal as much money as he can and leave the place as soon as possible. The funny person normally covres his face and tries to avoid security cameras. This happens every day in Melbourne at different small shops, 7/11s and others businesses.These businesses already have their own problems with shop lifters but an armed robbery is the last thing any business owner wants to have. In an armed robbery, remember to remain happy. Don't panic (although that is natural when you see a gun pointed at you). Don't try to argue with the person holding the gun. Follow orders and don't try to attach the person holding the weapon. You can get yourself killed. Don't say any rude words to the robber. Don't try to make him angry. The armed robbery normally takes less than a minute and the person runs away out of the shop where there is a get away car waiting for him.Even if you have a lot of cash in the drawer, let the woman take all he wants. Don't try to stop that person at all. Your life is much more important than the money. Try to talk to the person nicely. These are some of the sentences you can use:  - Why are you doing this to me? - I don't have a lot of money in the drower. It is not worth doing what you are doing. - You seem like a nice man. I don't think you are a criminal. - I will give you all the money that I have in the drower but is it really worth it? - I work hard for this money and now you are taking it. (This can start a conversation) - I haven't done any harm to you before, have I?  After the person leaves the place, don't try to run after him. Dial 911 and ask to talk to the police. Don't touch any thing that the robber touched. The police will come in a very short notice and do their work. They will search the nearby streets and try to find the robber. They will try to get finger prints of the robber. If you have security cameras this will help them too. Remember how tall the person was. Tell the police if the person was fat or slim. The police will get foot prints too so don't walk in the new spot that the robber stood in. Close the door and don't allow any customers inside the business. Ask people who were in the shop to stay inside and be witnesses. Those people can give more information to the police. If they have to leave, ask them for their addresses and phone numbers. The police can talk to them later. Call anyone from your friends and tell them that you are safe. Most people who rob businesses are drug addicts and they can be very dangerous and people who get robbed are always traumatised by the experience.

Tuesday 27 October 2009

Kitchen Work

When you work in a commercial kitchen, you are always a member of a team. Working in a team is very important in Australia. Everyone does a certain task and other people depend on this person to keep the workflow going. Working in a team requires some people skills. This means a friendly attitude towards others. This can be done by showing that you are a good listener, keeping eye contact and smiling when talking to others.
Safety is everyone's responsibility. If you see water on the floor, this can be dangerous to you and to others. Someone can slip and have a fall. This person can break an arm or a leg. There is a yellow warning sign that you can use to tell others who work in the kitchen that the floor is wet. This will give them a warning not to come near this spot. Make sure the floor is dry before you remove this sign.
Also be careful when using sharp objects in the kitchen. Using a knife in a wrong way can cause injury to you.
Make sure the kitchen is always free from clutter and that items are stored in the right place. Don't put any food cans on the floor. Sometimes the floor gets flooded with water and a lot of food becomes unsafe to eat.
If there is a flood in the kitchen, report it to your supervisor. He or she will call a plumber to come and fix the problem.
If you lift a heavy box in the kitchen and you feel pain in your back, fill in an incident report immediately. We learned in class how to fill in an incident report. If you want to have more information, go to Google  and type the words "sample incident report". See how many examples you can get.
Bacteria and germs are dangerous to people if they eat bad food. Bacteria can grow and multiply in worm temperatures. They need air, moisture and the right temperature.
Using proper food hygiene is a must when you work in a kitchen in Australia. Remember to wash your hands after you use the toilet, sneeze, smoke, have a break or touch raw food.
Certain foods can go bad quicker than others like meat, fish and egg. Other foods can be stored for a long time without going bad. You have to keep cooked food in the correct temperatures. Always avoid cross contamination. Don't mix raw food with cooked food. You can put other people's lives in danger. It is important to know how to avoid making food go bad.
Correct these sentences: 
When you work in a kitchen, you work alone most of the time.
Cross contamination is not a serious problem.
Fish and meat don't go bad quicker than other food types.
It is good to keep food in the food dangerous zone. (the wrong temperature)
When you see water spilt on the floor, leave it.
Using the yellow sign does not give a warning to others who work with you that there is a danger.
Having people skills is not very important when you get a job in Australia.
Bacteria can grow and multiply in sub zero temperatures.
Bacteria need four things to grow and multiply.
It is not important to wash your hands after using the toilet or sneezing.
If you see water spilt on the floor in the kitchen at your work placement, report it to your teacher at AMES.
Safety is only the manager's responsibility.
Cheese can go bad quicker than egg.
It is always safe to use a knife in a wrong way.
Working as a member in a team stops the workflow in the kitchen.
When others talk to you at work, it isn't necessary to keep eye contact with them.

Sunday 25 October 2009

The Sydney Tower


The building of Sydney Tower began in the late 70s` with the first 52 shops opening in 1972. The Sydney Tower was opened to the public in August 1981.
It is one of the safest buildings in the world. The design makes the tower capable of withstanding earthquakes and extreme wind conditions.
Three fast double Deck Lifts take nearly 40 seconds to travel from top to bottom.
The 420 windows of the tower are cleaned by a window-cleaning machine. This machine takes two days to clean all 420 windows.
Thousands of people like to visit the Sydney Tower when they come to Australia. From the golden beaches to the distant Blue Mountains, Sydney Tower takes you to the highest point above Sydney Australia for breathtaking 360-degree views of our beautiful harbour. Enjoy the beautiful Sydney views, including the Sydney Harbour Bridge, Sydney Opera House and Sydney Harbour, with free telescopes and free guided tours.
Sydney Tower is the perfect place to start your Sydney holiday or Sydney vacation. You can see the whole city before you commence your Sydney activities. It’s also a great place for family fun activities, or simply a day out to be amazed by Sydney’s best views!
Sydney Tower is located above Centrepoint shopping centre, at the corner of Pitt Street and Market Street. It is in the heart of Sydney's centre. Tickets can be purchased at 100 Market Street. You can go to Sydney tower by bus, ferry, monorail or train. Have fun at Sydney Tower.

Saturday 24 October 2009

Obama And the Internet

Many people use email to send messages to their families and friends. They use the internet to chat to them sometimes. This helps a lot because email is so fast. It is not like a message that you send in the post. People call the mail sent by post "snail mail".
Young people use social networking web sites like My Space and Facebook to keep in touch with their friends. Some people check their Facebook page many times in one day.
Nowadays politicians use social networking web sites too.  This is how they keep in touch with hundreds of thousands of people. If you go to Facebook, you can find pages for many politicians. People send them messages through these web sites and sometimes those politicians read them. Of course they don't read the thousands of emails sent every day to them. They employ staff.

I came across the Facebook page for Barak Obama. He keeps a lot of photos there and tells people about the new things he wants to do.
You have to be 13 years or more to use Facebook but many Australian children in primary schools have their own pages there. It is a famous web site all over the world. Everyday millions start using it and some people get addicted to it. They never stop using it.
Obama is like a super star. He is more famous than Michael Jackson and Madonna. He is known everywhere in the world. People are mad about him in Japan, Europe and Asia.
When Obama came to office this year millions of people hoped for a big change. Obama replaced George Bush as President of the United States of America. Bush started war in Iraq because America needed more petrol. He caused many disasters around the world too. People thought that anyone replacing Bush would make a better president.
After many months in power nothing happened. He sent more troops to Afghanistan. He didn't send food to people starving in Somalia. He sent weapons estimated at $40 million to kill tens of thousands there and he did nothing for millions of Palestinians who live in the world's only concentration camp in Gaza. He keeps good relationships with many dictators in the Middle East because they are good for America. He gives a blind eye for human rights crimes they commit because America needs petrol from the Middle East.
When Obama ran for president in America, his slogan was "Change". He promised that change was coming to America and the world. Now many months after he came to office, no-one can see that change. Now many people believe that the words to describe his policies is "I have Changed".
Fill in the gaps: 
find - food  - Obama - change -  super - not - States 
Many people use email to send messages to their families and friends. They use the internet to chat to them sometimes. This helps a lot because email is so fast. It is ........ like a message that you send in the post. People call the mail sent by post "snail mail". Young people use social networking web sites like My Space and Facebook to keep in touch with their friends. Some people check their Facebook page many times in one day. Nowadays politicians use social networking web sites too.  This is how they keep in touch with hundreds of thousands of people. If you go to Facebook, you can ........ pages for many politicians. People send them messages through these web sites and sometimes those politicians read them. Of course they don't read the thousands of emails sent every day to them. They employ staff. I came across the Facebook page for Barak ........... He keeps a lot of photos there and tells people about the new things he wants to do. You have to be 13 years or more to use Facebook but many Australian children in primary schools have their own pages there. It is a famous web site all over the world. Everyday millions start using it and some people get addicted to it. They never stop using it. Obama is like a .......... star. He is more famous than Michael Jackson and Madonna. He is known everywhere in the world. People are mad about him in Japan, Europe and Asia. When Obama came to office this year millions of people hoped for a big change. Obama replaced George Bush as President of the United ........ of America. Bush started war in Iraq because America needed more petrol. He caused many disasters around the world too. People thought that anyone replacing Bush would make a better president. After many months in power nothing happened. He sent more troops to Afghanistan. He didn't send ........... to people starving in Somalia. He sent weapons estimated at $40 million to kill tens of thousands there and he did nothing for millions of Palestinians who live in the world's only concentration camp in Gaza. He keeps good relationships with many dictators in the Middle East because they are good for America. He gives a blind eye for human rights crimes they commit because America needs petrol from the Middle East. When Obama ran for president in America, his slogan was "Change". He promised that ......... was coming to America and the world. Now many months after he came to office, no-one can see that change. Now many people believe that the words to describe his policies is "I have Changed".
Can you find some mistakes?
Many people use email to send messages to their families and friends. They use the internet to chat to them sometimes. This helps a lot because email is so slow. It is not like a message that you send in the post. People call the mail sent by post "snail mail". Young people use social networking web sites like My Space and Facebook to keep in touch with their friends. Some people check their Facebook page many times in one day. Nowadays politicians use social networking web sites too. This is how they keep in touch with hundreds of thousands of boys. If you go to Facebook, you can find pages for many politicians. People send them messages through these web sites and sometimes those politicians read them. Of course they don't like the thousands of emails sent every hour to them. They employ staff. I came across the Facebook page for Barak Obama. He keeps a lot of photos there and tells people about the new things he wants to do. You have to be 13 years or more to use Facebook but many Australian children in primary schools have their own pages there. It is a famous web site all over the world. Everyday millions start using it and some people get addicted to it. They never stop using it. Obama is like a super car. He is more famous than Michael Jackson and Madonna. He is known everywhere in the world. People are mad about him in Japan, Europe and Asia. When Obama came to office this year millions of people hoped for a small change. Obama replaced George Bush as President of the United States of America. Bush started war in Iraq because America needed more petrol. He caused many disasters around the world too. People thought that anyone replacing Bush would make a better president. After many months in power nothing happened. He sent more cars to Afghanistan. He didn't send food to people starving in Somalia. He sent weapons estimated at $40 million to kill tens of thousands there and he did nothing for millions of Palestinians who live in the world's only concentration camp in Gaza. He keeps good relationships with many dictators in the Middle East because they are good for America. He gives a blind eye for human rights crimes they commit because America needs petrol from the Middle East. When Obama ran for president in America, his slogan was "Change". He promised that change was coming to America and the world. Now many months after he came to office, no-one can see that change. Now many people believe that the words to describe his policies is "I have Changed".
Answer These Questions: 
Do you have a Facebook account?
How do people feel about Obama in Japan?
What was Obama's slogan when he was running for president?
Did Obama send food to starving people in Somalia?
What did people hope when George Bush was gone?
Do you use the internet more than once a day?
Do many children have Facebook accounts?
Why do many people like to use email?
Why do politicians use social networking web sites?
Do you think that politicians are sometimes good at telling lies?

Friday 23 October 2009

Final Presentation Test Information - VU Students

To those who are going to have to give a presentation on Friday, this information is vital. Your presentation will go for ten minutes. You have to work in pairs and you can choose your friend this time.  Make sure you tell your audience who you will be talking about. The first student will do the introduction and state the parts of the presentation. Then this person will introduce their colleague. The second student will have to give more information and then do the finishing. By finishing I mean thanking the audience and offering to answer any questions they may have.
The best thing about this test is that you can choose any person to talk about. You don't have to do Opera this time. If you have any questions, email me.
I will be timing you and going through a sheet. I will not give you your results but I will write a short report about your performance.
If you read from a paper, you will NOT pass my test.
You have to do a Powerpoint slide show. This will help you get organized. Get the pictures you want and the text has to be in points (Not paragraphs).
You are expected to look at the slide show to remind yourself of what to say and not to read it word by word.
I will be looking at the way you give information, your correct English and the parts of your presentation.
Get yourself ready from now and I will post the reader that I told you about in class this weekend. I want you to read it and do the online questions. This will help your English.
Your next course will not be as easy. You will be doing more English. This is why you have to be at a certain level to pass my test.
Always go to cdlponline.org and do more lessons from there. This is good enough for your English for now. There are more difficult web sites you can work from but not for now.
There are many videos on the net on how to give an effective presentation. You can watch some of them. There are books on how to give a presentation in the library. You can also find information online on how to give a presentation. You don't need to do a big slide show. A simple one will do for now. I am not interested in your computer skills at this stage. I am more interested in your ability to speak English.
The readings in the book on Obama and Opera and other characters will help you to learn how to sort out the information you have about the person you will talk about.
Good Luck with your presentation.

Thursday 22 October 2009

Saving Energy

It is a fact now that we are running out of natural resources. After 100 years there will be no more petrol. The sea level will rise. There will be less water to drink and a few countries will disappear under water. That is why we need to use other resources to get all the energy we need to continue having all the services we have today. 
We need to use green energy that does not make the planet dirty and not cause a lot of pollution. 
We need to use less water than we do now because we simply don't have enough.  Taking a shower in less than 5 minutes will save tens of liters of water. 
People try to save energy in different ways. Children are encouraged to walk to school in a group in what we call the Walking-to-school Bus. Some parents look after the children while they walk to ensure their safety. Those parents also make friends at the same time.

Other people install solar panels to generate electricity and get hot water.  The problem is that these solar panels cost a lot of money to buy and install. 
Still others install energy-efficient globes to save electricity. These globes don't use as much energy as the old ones. They don't use their air conditioner at home very often in order to save energy. 
Many people in Australia now buy big water tanks and keep them in their gardens. These water tanks can rain water to be used to keep gardens green if there is not enough rain. 
Some people ride bikes to work. There is one day in Australia when people are encouraged to ride their bikes to work and not use their cars. Not many people know about this day but it is hoped that more and more people start using their bikes more. 
There are different businesses that wash cars using recycled water. You can pay a few dollars and wash your car yourself there or get people to do the job for you but it will be more expensive. 
Fill in the gaps:
day - lot - call - recycled - globes - drink - use
It is a fact now that we are running out of natural resources. After 100 years there will be no more petrol. The sea level will rise. There will be less water to ......... and a few countries will disappear under water. That is why we need to ........ other resources to get all the energy we need to continue having all the services we have today. We need to use green energy that does not make the planet dirty and not cause a ......... of pollution. We need to use less water than we do now because we simply don't have enough.  Taking a shower in less than 5 minutes will save tens of liters of water. People try to save energy in different ways. Children are encouraged to walk to school in a group in what we ......... the Walking-to-school Bus. Some parents look after the children while they walk to ensure their safety. Those parents also make friends at the same time. Other people install solar panels to generate electricity and get hot water. The problem is that these solar panels cost a lot of money to buy and install. Still others install energy-efficient globes to save electricity. These ........ don't use as much energy as the old ones. They don't use their air conditioner at home very often in order to save energy. Many people in Australia now buy big water tanks and keep them in their gardens. These water tanks can rain water to be used to keep gardens green if there is not enough rain. Some people ride bikes to work. There is one ........ in Australia when people are encouraged to ride their bikes to work and not use their cars. Not many people know about this day but it is hoped that more and more people start using their bikes more. There are different businesses that wash cars using ........... water. You can pay a few dollars and wash your car yourself there or get people to do the job for you but it will be more expensive. 
Can you find some mistakes here?
It is a fact now that we are running out of teaching resources. After 100 years there will be no more petrol. The sea level will rise. There will be less water to drink and a few shops will disappear under water. That is why we need to use other resources to get all the energy we need to continue having all the services we have today. We need to use green energy that does not make the planet dirty and not cause a lot of pollution. We need to use less water than we do now because we simply don't have enough. Taking a shower in less than 5 minutes will save tens of liters of water. People try to kill energy in different ways. Children are encouraged to walk to school in a group in what we call the Walking-to-school train. Some parents look after the children while they walk to ensure their safety. Those parents also make friends at the same time. Other people install solar panels to generate electricity and get hot water. The problem is that these solar panels cost a lot of money to buy and install. Still others install energy-efficient TVs to save electricity. These globes don't use as much energy as the old ones. They don't use their air conditioner at home very often in order to save energy. Many people in Australia now buy big water tanks and keep them in their gardens. These water tanks can rain water to be used to keep gardens green if there is not enough rain. Some people ride bikes to work. There is one day in Australia when people are encouraged to ride their cars to work and not use their cars. Not many people know about this day but it is hoped that more and more people start using their bikes more. There are different businesses that wash cars using recycled water. You can pay a few dollars and wash your car yourself there or get people to do the job for you but it will be more interesting.

My Culture Shock in Australia

I had my first culture shock in Australia when I was on the way from the airport to my first house in Balwayn. I did not see one policeman in the street to direct the traffic. Every thing was controlled electronically.
My second shock was to see men and women kissing in public. This was something that I had never expected. I only saw that in movies on TV but never in real life.
Another shock was that people had to work very hard just to pay their rent. Rent money is too high in Australia especially for people who have just immigrated from other countries.
My biggest culture shock was to see that the government in Australia allowing brothels to operate. In my country this is a crime. We don't see it as some sort of freedom.
Another culture shock was to watch TV after 8.30 at night. In my country sex scenes are not allowed at all. Here in Australia it is totally a different story.
Another culture shock was to see that many people were gamblers. They wasted their money on gambling. Many crimes were committed because of gambling and the government did nothing to stop it. They seem to care about money more than people here. (This is what I think)
Public transport in Melbourne is shocking and expensive. Busses are very bad. They come every 20 minutes. They take you on a tour if you want to go from one place to another.
In my country busses are even worse. They are overcrowded. A bus can take as many as 150 people. That is why you don't take your family on a bus if you want to go anywhere. There is a lot of pushing there to be able to get off the bus.
In a tram in my country there are special carriages for girls and women. This makes it easy for women to travel.
In Egypt taxi drivers can charge you any amount of money they like. That is why there are many fights with taxi drivers. They can stop and ask you where you want to go and then look at you and drive off without taking you. They tell you how much they will charge you before you get in the taxi. If you don't like the price, they drive off without taking you. They can also take other passengers too.
One culture shock in Australia was to see that it is expensive to use a taxi. It can cost you about 100 dollars to go by taxi from Box Hill to the airport.
One culture shock was to see that many Australian like to go to nearby countries to enjoy their beaches. In Australia there are many beautiful beaches but still Australians like to travel abroad.
Another culture shock was to see policemen and policewomen speak to the public in a nice way. There is not much corruption in the police force in Australia. In police forces in many countries "curruption" is the word to use when talking about police work.
Some people from the Middle East get a culture shock when they see that they have to use toilet paper. In the Middle East people use water pressure and not toilet paper. They think it is dirty to use tiolet paper. Toilets in the Middle East are fitted with small pipes.
One culture shock was to see that a plumber, a mechanic or a painter can cost you a fortune if you have a job to be done. they charge you by the hour and normally you end up paying a lot of money. That is why many Australian prefer to do the job D.I. Y.  (Do it yourself)
Another culture shock was to speak to my boss without using any titles. In my country I used to say the words "Mr" and "Mrs" before I used names while talking to people face to face. For example I would say to my boss "How are you today Mr. Mohamed?"
In Australia people don't usually use titles. I was shocked one day when my daughter called one of the mothers in her primary school by her name without saying "Mrs" first. I went to that mother and apologized for my daughter's horrible manners. I learned after that it was OK to call people's names without titles.
Now most of these experiences are not longer strange to me. I have been in Australia for many years. I am sure when my kids go to Egypt one day they will experiece many culture shocks of their own.

Excursions


In our course we sometimes go out to visit different places. These visits help us understand more and more about Australia. They give us an idea also on how people work in Australia. Last term I took my students on different excursions. They went to Box Hill TAFE and were given a presentaion on different courses they could do there. They had a chance to visit the kitchens they had. The bad thing was that this was a time for the students to do a lot of tests. We were given a tour though by one of the staff there. We took many pictures and the students were excited about starting work in the hospitality industry.
There is also a park not far away from AMES and we use it to do some speaking activities there when it is not too hot or too cold. It is a good chance to get out of the class we have to be in for 5 hours.

Alfred Nobel


Alfred Nobel was born in Stockholm on October 21, 1833. His father, Immanuel Nobel, was an engineer and inventor. He built bridges and buildings in Stockholm, the capital of Sweden. In connection with his construction work, Immanuel Nobel also experimented with different techniques of blasting rock.

Alfred’s mother, Andrietta Ahlsell, came from a wealthy family. Immanuel Nobel lost all his money. He was forced into bankruptcy the same year Alfred Nobel was born. In 1837, Immanuel Nobel left Stockholm and his family to start a new career in Finland and in Russia. To support the family, Andrietta Nobel started a grocery store which provided a little income.
At the same time Immanuel Nobel was successful in his new work in St. Petersburg, Russia. He started a mechanical workshop. He made equipments for the Russian army. He also convinced the generals that naval mines could be used to block enemy naval ships from threatening the city. The British ships could not come near the city of St. Petersburg. Immanuel Nobel was also a clever man. He made some arms and steam engines.
Successful in his industrial and business, Immanuel Nobel was able, in 1842, to bring his family to St. Petersburg. There, his sons were given a first class education by private teachers. The training included natural sciences, languages and literature. By the age of 17, Alfred Nobel was fluent in Swedish, Russian, French, English and German. His primary interests were in English literature and poetry as well as in chemistry and physics.
Alfred’s father, who wanted his sons to become engineers, disliked Alfred’s interest in poetry and found his son rather shy. His father sent him abroad for further training in chemical engineering. Alfred traveled to Italy, Germany and the U.S.
In Paris he met a young Italian chemist who had invented a highly explosive liquid. It was too dangerous to use. It had more power than gun powder. Alfred Nobel became very interested in it and wanted to use it in a different way. He wanted to use it in blasting rocks.
First he wanted to make it safe to use. He wanted to protect the lives of the people who would use it in the future.
In 1852 Alfred Nobel was asked to come back and work in the family business. At that time the Russian army wanted more deliveries. When the war ended and conditions changed, Immanuel Nobel lost all his money. Immanuel and two of his sons, Alfred and Emil, left St. Petersburg together and returned to Stockholm. His other two sons, Robert and Ludvig, remained in St. Petersburg. With some difficulties they managed to start the family business and then went on to work in the oil industry in the southern part of the Russian empire. They were very successful and became very rich.
After his return to Sweden in 1863, Alfred Nobel worked with explosives. He conducted several big explosions, including one in which his brother Emil and several other persons were killed in 1864. The government banned the use of explosives within the city of Stockholm because they were too dangerous. Alfred did his experiments far away from Stockholm. In 1864 he started producing explosives in larger amounts.
To make the use of his explosives safer, Alfred Nobel tried to add many things. He used something called silica. He could make a paste from the explosive liquid. This paste is what we now call dynamite. Workers could use this new invention safely to blast rocks. More and more companies wanted to buy dynamite to build roads and houses. It reduced the cost of hiring many people. Alfred Nobel was a very successful businessman. He had more than 90 factories in 20 different countries.
Although he lived in Paris much of his life, he was always traveling. He focused on the development of explosives technology as well as other chemical inventions, including such materials as synthetic rubber, leather and silk. By the time of his death in 1896 he had 355 new inventions.
Alfred Nobel had the mind of an inventor and the heart of a poet. He saw his invention used in killing people and destroying mankind. He was very sad to see that. He was interested in making peace. He offered to give a lot of money to help humans. In 1895 Nobel wrote his will, leaving most of his fortune to a foundation to promote work in Peace, Medicine, Biology and chemistry.

Some of these sentences are wrong

1. Alfred Nobel was born in Sydney, Australia.

2. Alfred Nobel had three other brothers.

3. Alfred Nobel was born in the year 1833.

4. His father worked in a grocery store.

5. His mother came from a rich family.

6. Immanuel Nobel lost all his sons and was forced into bankruptcy.

7. Alfred's mother had to go to Russia to work.

8. Alfred's father went to work in a city in Russia called St. Petersburg.
9. Alfred's father did not do well in Russia and lived as a poor man.

10. Alfred and his brothers got very good education in Russia.

11. Alfred was fluent in English, German and Chinese.
12. Alfred's father wanted his sons to work at Safeway.
13. Alfred travelled to Italy, France, Germany and the U.S when he was a young man.
14. Alfred met an Italian woman who had invented something very powerful.
15. After the war finished in Russia, Alfred's father made a lot of money.
16. Alfred went back to live in Stockholm with his father and three brothers.
17. Alfred's father died in a big explosion.
18. Alfred made the new invention safe to use when he added silica

19. Alfred Nobel was a scientist but he did not do well with money.

20. Alfred lived in Spain most of his life.
21. Alfred Nobel left all his money to promote work in making war.
22. 5 people from Egypt have won the Nobel Prize so far.
23. A lot of lessons can be learned from the life of this great man.

24. George Bush is the best man to get the Nobel Prize for peace in 2007.

25. The government banned the use of explosives inside the city of Stockholm because it was too dangerou