Sunday 30 May 2010

Ramos

Ramos comes from Brazil. He is 30 years old and he works as a real estate agent in Melbourne.
When Ramos came to Australia for the first time he was twelve years old. He came to visit his aunt who lived in Australia. He was fascinated by Melbourne and wanted to live in Australia.
After Ramos finished his high school studies in his country, he enrolled to study at Melbourne University. He worked on improving his English all the time and spent a lot of time studying at home.
He finished a degree after three years and started to work as a real estate agent shortly after that.
It was an advantage for Ramos to speak more than one language. He had many clients who liked him and he sold many houses because he gave honest advice to his customers.
When Ramos was 26 years old he met a young girl who wanted to buy a house as investment.
Ramos fell in love with her and he asked her to marry him. She agreed because she found that he was a nice guy.
Now Ramos and his wife live in the house he showed the young lady to buy. They want to move to a bigger house before their first baby arrives soon.
Ramos works long hours now but every thing will change when the baby is born.

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country - met - old - baby - clients - nice
Ramos comes from Brazil. He is 30 years old and he works as a real estate agent in Melbourne. When Ramos came to Australia for the first time he was twelve years ...................... He came to visit his aunt who lived in Australia. He was fascinated by Melbourne and wanted to live in Australia. After Ramos finished his high school studies in his ..................., he enrolled to study at Melbourne University. He worked on improving his English all the time and spent a lot of time studying at home. He finished a degree after three years and started to work as a real estate agent shortly after that. It was an advantage for Ramos to speak more than one language. He had many .................... who liked him and he sold many houses because he gave honest advice to his customers. When Ramos was 26 years old he ................. a young girl who wanted to buy a house as investment. Ramos fell in love with her and he asked her to marry him. She agreed because she found that he was a .................... guy. Now Ramos and his wife live in the house he showed the young lady to buy. They want to move to a bigger house before their first baby arrives soon. Ramos works long hours now but every thing will change when the ................ is born.

Can you find any mistakes?
Ramos comes from Brazil. He is 30 years old and he works as a real estate agent in Melbourne. When Ramos came to Australia for the second time he was twelve days old. He came to visit his aunt who lived in Australia. He was fascinated by Melbourne and wanted to live in Australia. After Ramos finished his high school studies in his country, he enrolled to study at Melbourne University. He worked on improving his English all the time and spent a lot of time studying at home. He finished a degree after three years and started to work as a real estate agent shortly after that. It was an advantage for Ramos to speak more than one language. He had many clients who liked her and he sold many houses because he gave honest advice to his customers. When Ramos was 26 years old he met a young girl who wanted to buy a house as investment. Ramos fell in love with her and he asked her to marry him. She agreed because she found that he was a nice guy. Now Ramos and his wife live in the school he showed the young lady to buy. They want to move to a bigger house before their first baby arrives soon.
Ramos works long hours now but every thing will change when the baby is late.